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Day 3 of 7

30 min

The Player Promise

Day 3 -- what feeling does this game guarantee the player will have?

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Pixel

When the kid opens the day

Welcome back. Today we write the most important sentence in your whole game. The player promise. This is one sentence that says -- when somebody finishes my game, they will feel ___. That sentence is the north star. Every choice from here on out -- art, music, levels, rules -- we check against this sentence. If a choice does not serve the promise, we cut it. That is how pros work.

Today’s artifact

Player Promise Card -- one sentence, the north star, saved to your Capstone Locker

The lesson, beat by beat

  1. 1

    Why feelings beat features

    ~5 min

    Pixel says

    Most kids -- and a LOT of grown-up game makers -- start with features. Multiplayer! Cool weapons! Boss fights! That is starting from the wrong end. Pros start with the feeling and work backward. Mario delivers joyful flow. Limbo delivers dread. Animal Crossing delivers cozy belonging. Feeling first. Always.

    Kid does

    Read three games + the feeling each one delivers. Pixel makes them name the feeling before revealing.

  2. 2

    The Promise formula

    ~5 min

    Pixel says

    Promise format: When the player finishes my game, they will feel ___. Fill in the blank with ONE feeling. Not three. Not eight. One. The more specific the feeling, the better. Sneaky is good. Like-a-cat-burglar-who-just-pulled-off-a-perfect-heist is better.

    Kid does

    Read five example promises from real games. Notice the level of specificity.

  3. 3

    Prompt AI for promise options

    ~8 min

    Pixel says

    Use your Recipe Card from last week. Goal -- five candidate promises for [your game]. Details -- here is my pitch and my Love List. Examples -- promises like (paste two examples). Limits -- it has to be ONE feeling, not a list. Go.

    Kid does

    Write the prompt using the GOAL+DETAILS+EXAMPLES+LIMITS recipe. Send. Read the five candidates AI returns.

  4. 4

    Pick the one (and rewrite it)

    ~7 min

    Pixel says

    Pick the candidate that hit you hardest. Now rewrite it in YOUR words. Not AI words. Your words. Because this sentence has to feel like you when you read it back. The pros never use AI words straight. They taste them and rewrite.

    Kid does

    Choose one promise. Rewrite it in their own voice. Pixel checks for one-feeling-only.

  5. 5

    Save the Promise Card

    ~5 min

    Pixel says

    Save it. From here on, every Friday we read this sentence out loud and check -- is the game still serving the promise? That is how this game stays alive.

    Kid does

    Click Save. Promise Card lands in the Capstone Locker under Week 2 / Day 3.

Pixel signs off

You have a promise. That is your north star. Tomorrow we build the loop that delivers the promise. See you Thursday.

Show your grown-up

Show your grown-up your Promise Card and ask -- do you think this game could actually make somebody feel that? Their honest answer (yes / no / not yet) is useful feedback.

What goes to the parent dashboard

Your kid wrote a Player Promise today -- one specific feeling their game is engineered to deliver (e.g. 'you will feel sneaky', 'you will feel hopeful', 'you will feel like a detective who just figured it out'). This is harder than it sounds. It is the design north star for the rest of the project.

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